Today we were learning to self assess our work. We asked ourselves, How can I measure my progress? I think I did quite well because I found my writing level for adding commas and my next steps.
Kia ora Daetyn. my name is Eva B. I really enjoyed reading about the missing boat and how at the end he found a sword and a scroll. That part of when Arkiel and his dad went on the reminded me of when me and my dad went fishing. Next time probably use more verbs.
well done daetyn love it
ReplyDeleteGreat post Daetyn. If you didn't know, you are supposed to leave a space after you do a full stop, or a comma.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Daetyn. my name is Eva B. I really enjoyed reading about the missing boat and how at the end he found a sword and a scroll. That part of when Arkiel and his dad went on the reminded me of when me and my dad went fishing. Next time probably use more verbs.
ReplyDeletethanks for the advice
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